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22nd-Oct-2006 01:05 pm
Princess Aurora
Title: Without Words
Fandom: Naruto
Pairing: Gaara/Sakura
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or any of its characters. Profit is not being made from the following piece of fiction.
Notes: Written for 52_flavours

Her name and hair matched the cherry blossoms, fifteen year old Gaara thought.

His blank eyes watched the short haired ninja from a distance. She was standing at the top of the mountain dedicated to all the Hokages of Kohona. On top of the Third, to be precise.

So if her hair and name matched the blossoms, why didn’t her mood?

From what he understood, cherry blossoms were light-hearted. But that information was gathered from what his sister told him. Temari could be trusted, though.

The redhead jumped from building to building until he stood behind her. If she saw him from the corner of her eye, he wouldn’t know. For awhile, nothing but the wind moved.

Never in his visits, had Gaara seen Sakura in this kind of state. Although, he had only knew her for a short while…

An image of a black haired male passed through his mind. He knew.

When her pink head abruptly turned, the Sand Kazekage did not flinch.


His name and hair didn’t match death anymore, fifteen year Sakura thought.

Her vibrant jade eyes absorbed the boy behind her. He stood with his arms crossed and his eyes were on her. Then again, where else would they be? She was the only one around.

So if his hair and name didn’t match death, would they truly represent love now?

From what Naruto told her, Gaara shared the same childhood as him. Both were prejudiced against. That information came from her team mate. Naruto, she thought, could be trusted.

Sakura watched as the male made his way towards her, green orbs never leaving his form. He truly changed in the past three years. No more did he think of himself and murder unnecessarily.

Gaara become more open with people…especially her. With a lighter mood, Sakura distracted her thoughts from retrieving Sasuke. When he finally stood next to her, the pink haired girl noticed him staring ahead.

“Hoping…is that something wonderful?”

She merely blinked before grinning softly. Gaara could be a little slow but he understood. Hesitantly, Sakura placed her head on his shoulder. With her eyes closed, a reflection of Gaara was painted next to Sasuke in her mind.

“Of course.”
23rd-Oct-2006 03:54 pm (UTC)
I really like this. :) A couple things I spotted, though:

"Sand Hokage" would either be Sand KAGE or just Kazekage. :)

And "orbs" describing eyes... Meh, maybe it's just me, but that's a pet peeve I have for fanfiction! ^^;
23rd-Oct-2006 10:17 pm (UTC)
Thanks for the correction :) I've been out of Naruto for awhile >.< For the orbs thing...I've been using that forever so its hard to not use it anymore ^^;

Thanks for reading :D
24th-Oct-2006 05:59 am (UTC)
Heh, same here with the orbs thing. It screams "Urple alert--run now!" to me.
23rd-Oct-2006 04:00 pm (UTC)
It wouldn't be 'Sand Hokage', 'Hokage' is Fire Shadow and only the Konoha Kage has the title. XD; Gaara is Kazekage or Wind Shadow.

Just wanted to say that, though. =3 Other than that tidbit that the Narutard in my insisted on pointing out, it was sweet. >o< (ohgawd. Gaara and Sweet. Maybe I should revise. XDDD All the same, I LIKED IT)
23rd-Oct-2006 10:18 pm (UTC)
Fixed ^_^ Thank you for pointing it out and for reading :D
24th-Oct-2006 01:49 am (UTC)
Aw, very cute!
24th-Oct-2006 02:35 am (UTC)
Thank you :)
24th-Oct-2006 04:19 am (UTC)
soooooo cuuutee. i'm really starting to like this pairing =]

just one thing: i think instead of "starring" you meant "staring"
24th-Oct-2006 05:40 am (UTC)
Hehe, thanks for reading and I'm glad to convert :D
As for the starring thing, that's how I've been taught to spell it but that way probably makes more sense...thanks for pointing it out.
10th-Dec-2006 03:22 am (UTC)
your story made me say awwwww <-- jebus christ >.>
10th-Dec-2006 03:30 am (UTC)
Glad to draw something out of you :)
Thanks for reading!
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